Curse

Awsm4all · Feb 12, 2010, 12:29 AM // 00:29

I'm currently writing a GW story that I'm considering posting in more places, but I want to give it a more professional touch. I don't really have a beta reader whose willing to give me constructive criticism about my work. There are a few places where I want to make sure that the story makes sense and works well with the rest of it. I've actually written several chapters (up to 13 and counting), but I want to make sure they are clear before posting them.

Synopsis (and this is the summary I have on Fanfiction.net): Title: "I'll Look for you." Years before the events of Nightfall, Acolyte Sousuke was captured by corsairs while on a ship and was placed in the keeping of a rugged pirate who claimed him for his own. Slash. Rated M for later chapters. Sousuke/2OMCs

If anyone is interested and would like to help out and wants more information, send me a PM or respond to this thread.

Shayne Hawke · Feb 12, 2010, 12:40 AM // 00:40

I always knew Sousuke was a flamer.

Awsm4all · Feb 12, 2010, 12:56 AM // 00:56

Why do you think I chose him as my MC? ;D But I will say that he's far more developed in my story than he is in the game (where he has approx. a full minute of screen time).

Elephantaliste · Feb 12, 2010, 02:09 AM // 02:09

if you want a reader, do him a favor, keep default font... first of all.

Awsm4all · Feb 12, 2010, 02:19 AM // 02:19

Yeah, after seeing it for a while, I realized it became a bit of an eye sore. Is anyone actually looking at this thread with the least bit of interest?

Seigibushi · Feb 12, 2010, 09:25 AM // 09:25

I am, actually. I'd like to read it and provide constructive criticism where needed ^^

Masmar · Feb 12, 2010, 09:42 AM // 09:42

Same here, send me a pm or something to set something up